Audience appeal

Kirsten and I both believe that the thesis is clear because he states unequivocally that higher education is broken. The writer uses sources that are documented appropriately by giving credit to other authors use of evidence. For example in passage six he state a quote by Daniel Park in his book, A whole new mind: Why right brainers will rule the future. His quote was "Free agent economy which was envisioned by Daniel Park. We both can relate to the fact that not everyone needs to go to college unless their career choice is within the health care field. He states that college is expensive and we as readers can relate due to the fact that most of us students are taking out loans just to become successful.